A braided essay is one that weaves two or more distinct “threads” into a single essay. A thread can be a story with a plot or simply a string of thought about a specific topic.
This alternating movement draws out themes and ideas from each thread, such that the essay as a whole points to larger ideas and themes.
‘now’ and ‘then’ narrators as “I”
I don’t know who I miss
or
what I long for
but
I know what I want
thread A: left
thread B: middle
thread C: right
weave: 3 strands: weave left under middle, pull from right, weave right under middle, and so on..
Caught
I love braiding hair
she sits
in between my legs
while I braid her hair
two French-
two reverse French braids
the ones that you can feel on the outside
I love braiding hair
I love braiding her hair
touching
weaving my fingers through
making it do what I want
her relaxation into my lap
her relaxation to my strokes of hair
pulling that one piece. -that sends chills down her body
her smile
no matter how it turned
because I’m weaved
in her head
on her mind
on her head
on her head
my braids
weaved
on her head
tied
Together
calm, happy
comfortable, they rest
on her collar bones
comfortably, we rest
together
her hair on my collar bone
between my arm and my chest
her fingers weaved in mine
my essence on her head
hers on my mind
in my chest
in my veins
be mine
I say
she’s mine.
as much as the braids
belong to her
they are mine
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