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Asking chatgpt what emotion to write about and a poetic form to write it in.

Here’s what chatgpt said:

grief

literally so rude. Should I pick something else? I’ll ask.

pick a random emotion for me to write about

How about melancholy? It’s a bittersweet emotion that combines sadness with a quiet, reflective sense of longing. It’s often associated with nostalgia, but there’s something uniquely beautiful about the way it lingers. Melancholy captures that sense of sadness mixed with beauty, making it rich for exploration in poetry.

Would you like to dive into this emotion for your poem?

No, thank you. I do like the idea of sadness mixed with beauty. It really almost does sound like nostalgia.

Sadness, Beauty

pick a random poetic form

a villanelle

A villanelle has a strict rhyme scheme of ABA for the first five tercets (three-line stanzas) and then the final quatrain follows an ABA rhyme scheme with the two repeating lines included.

The format looks like this:

  1. A (first line)
  2. B (second line)
  3. A (third line)
  4. A (fourth line)
  5. B (fifth line)
  6. A (sixth line)
  7. A (repeats 1st line)
  8. B (repeats 2nd line)
  9. A
  10. A
  11. B
  12. A
  13. A
  14. B
  15. A
  16. A
  17. B
  18. A
  19. (Final quatrain, repeating the two rhyming lines

I do not feel like making all of that blue but you get it, chatgpt said it.

This looks different than what I learned but I’m gonna roll with it.

Sadness, Beauty

Okay, wait I asked follow up questions.

BTW A and B mean end rhymes. So the last word of an A line would rhyme with the last word of an A line. Same with B. The end word of lines labeled as B rhyme with the last word of the other B lines.

Anywho.

here we go

Villanelle Structure (with A1 and A2):

  1. A1 – First line (this line will be repeated later)
  2. B – Second line
  3. A – Third line (rhymes with line 1)
  4. A1 – (Repeats line 1)
  5. B – (Rhymes with line 2)
  6. A – (Rhymes with line 3)
  7. A2 – (Repeats line 3)
  8. B – (Rhymes with line 2)
  9. A – (Rhymes with line 1)
  10. A1 – (Repeats line 1)
  11. B – (Rhymes with line 2)
  12. A – (Rhymes with line 3)
  13. A2 – (Repeats line 3)
  14. B – (Rhymes with line 2)
  15. A – (Rhymes with line 1)
  16. A1 – (Repeats line 1)
  17. B – (Rhymes with line 2)
  18. A – (Rhymes with line 3)
  19. A1 / A2 – Final quatrain, repeat lines A1 and A2 (in any order)

that makes more sense.

I told you I’m interested in words and letters and poetry and linguistics and writing haha.

Villanelle : Melancholy ; sadness beauty

A1: I want more

B: what do you mean

A: with you, for you- I adore..

A1: I want more

B: Can’t you see, can’t you feel- what’s between us..

A: there’s so much feeling, I can’t store

A2: stay. I’m here.

B: I’m conscious

A: I know it feels sore

A1: I want more

B: you’re so ominous

A: I want you at your core

A2: stay. I’m here.

B: fuss

A: I want to hear your lore

A1: I want more

B: trust..

A: pour..

A1: I want more

A2: stay. I’m here.

Book , sandwich

ABAAB

give me gimme that is MY book

I don’t want to eat the sandwich

Haunted House: spook.

Bring me back please pook

play fun switch.

xx Kstar

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